Animation rough cut and review

Animation so far, I haven't included any music for background but have completed the animation with the time I had left. I think it could maybe use some more detail from spending more time with it but so far I am happy with the overall result. I would have liked to have added in some audio to do with the voices, voiceovers would have made it much better so if I had have more time then I would have tried to do that instead of writing the words out. I have added as much colour to make it more fun to watch, I like the flow of the frames also as it makes it look more creative rather than just it look like a scribble on the page

I have completed all previous blog work, I need to upload 2 pieces of paper work to go with the animation work as I ran out of time in which to do it in.

I have completed the Animation when I went in for the day to complete it and managed to upload it but I didn't have enough time to find music to go in the background.

Log sheets

Screenshot of edit and evaluation

I am currently working on shot 124 and am almost finished, so far I have completed the shots where Hemmings falls asleep at the desk, I have included facial expressions as best as I could and am now trying to create the shots where Hemmings wakes up and is running down the road trying to make it to his exam on time. I wanted to create it so it wasn't straight on but on an angle instead as I think this works better as when I draw Hemmings running down the road, it will be clearer to see rather than looking from the back.
When I have done the main shots, I will work on filling in the gaps between them so they aren't so jumpy and then I can hopefully add more detail in this way. If I have enough time to do this then hopefully I would be able to get 20 or so more shots in to make it look better.
With the end result I am happy with it although I would have preferred to have spent more time on it or maybe used another software to create it to make the process a lot easier. I have added in audio for the background music, something catchy to go through the whole length of the sequence to go with the mood of the overall story.

Update of animation

So far I have created a new each layer for each shot/movement that I have drawn out, so far I have done 75 shots and am currently doing the greeting between Hemmings and the friends, I have only done the main parts so far so once I have completed the main shots I will fill in the gaps so that it will be more clear. Also, the drawings of the characters are fairly rough which is the style  I was going for as I don't want it to be too neat and polished, I am also trying to move the characters mouths as they talk so you can tell it is them who is saying them as I am writing the words above them instead of making them speak through a voiceover which, I prefer for my sequence.

Animation so far

I have so far created 16 seconds worth of my animation, I'm trying to do the main points first then add in the detail, I've drawn it fairly rough as that is the style i was initially going for and i like the overall look of it. My only worry is that it isn't clear when you watch it but i am trying to create it so it is clear.